What was she doing here in this hot weather? The day was hot and humid, yet going in and out of the subway would have been too expensive. Her chin hit the sidewalk. It happened almost without her realizing it. One minute she was up and the next down. Her whole body hurt but the chin got the worst of it. he hoped someone in the street full of people would offer to help her up. No one did. he struggled up again as best she could, picking up her purse. She shook her head and on she went. The day was too bright to think about heartlessness.


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5 Responses to “Down”

  1. Alex Says:

    did this happen to you?

  2. beccar Says:

    Yes, it happened to me. Eugenia

  3. Alex Says:

    Well written. Grim. Sad

  4. Christian Says:

    That’s really good. I like very much the way you explain things. It brings me up into the story.

    • beccar Says:

      Thank you, Christian. Please keep reading my work and commenting on it. Eugenia, Different Flags  The Story of Ani and Forbidden Love in Argentina Read Eugenia’s blog at Search word: Differentflags,,, differentflags Different Flags, A Novel by Eugenia Renskoff . ISBN: 0877142572. Release Date: 2002

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