La Momia Revised

La Momia, Revised

She held the bath stuff in her arms—the bar of soap, the small towel, the comb. Her slippers were next to her bare feet. She had seen the fat man go into the bathroom, his pink cotton robe covering what it could of his body. He wasn’t coming out. She was tired. All she wanted was to wash off the day’s dirt and grime off of her. The door opened and the fat man started to come out, one foot, two feet, one leg, two legs. Her own feet flew her to the bathroom. “La Momia,” he said. “I see that we have La Momia still here.” “La Momia? I wonder who the real mummy is around here? I am not a dummy.” she asked herself.” Is it you? Yes, it has to be you. You are the dumb one.” She closed the bathroom door quickly. From the kitchen she heard the fat man’s voice talking with the woman making dinner. “The mummy has nowhere to go.”


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2 Responses to “La Momia Revised”

  1. alex Says:

    very good writing-tense

    • beccar Says:

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